actually, it’s a lot off tempo.

and it sounds like it was recorded on an answering machine.

i actually kinda like this, keyboard sounds good in a lo-fi sort of way.

Man, I know u spent time on this, and I appreciate that, but this sucks. What the hell is up with that raunchy a- beat? And my vocals are hella off. Hit and miss, man. Pull this down and stop embarassing both of us and post a better remix. I just gotta keep it real…

The instrumental base has a kind of lo-fi possibility to it. I don’t worry so much about the sync, although it’s imperfect.
I’m more concerned that the backing just doesn’t give enough
variety to serve the lyric. It might be fun to take your loop and mix it with lots of other things to hunt something fun. I’m concerned that this one is just not varied enough to hold the interest.