I’m not crazy about the strings but i love the drums and how u played them. Strings on the hooks are nice, but the strings on the verse don’t do much for me. Nice job in keeping the vocals in sync. Welcome to ccMixter, looking forward to hearing more.

dr. did you mean “schnitzel” like in “wiener schnitzel”?

It fits pretty well, and the mixing comes out quite well. The strings defuse some of the energy in the lyrics, for me, but they are an interesting approach.

I think that it might be fun to do a similar accompaniment approach, but with something a tad less removed from the action, such as perhaps a synth bass.

But I don’t want to take away from your fine effort here, which is interesting and craftmanlike.