great timbre & mix on the BT instruments & a fine musical poetry to surround em’s piquant observations on life as we know it.

Love the music here. I would like to see the poem more integrated with the melody from the beginning instead of (what appears to me to me to be)a layering of the poem on top of the music. The two entities are meant to become an equal merger of word/image and melodic support for the imagery at hand. The purest way to do this is to start with the poem and create the music around the words allowing them space to move and breathe within the mind of the listener. Word/imagery /music collaborations are challenging. My best to you in the coming year. ejc