great instrumental, the lyrics are really well used. You cut some vocals but it was necessary. Good work!

Simple and beautiful..fits in perfectly with the lyrics. Good feeling..!

I’ve tried this one, so it’s interesting to hear a different approach - I like it, the repeated riff gives it a kind of urgency.

Great job!
I can’t feel the cuts, It’s like this track is an original.
Really like the beat, different from what I used to do, you also did a great job on my partner LERY’s vocals, he is not easy to synched and you did it perfectly!
I don’t know if you understand Freanch but all the track meaning had been kept.
Ton conclude :

Ce son est bon.
Seems Lery has Upgraded his flow.
Good instrumental it’s a hip hop great stuff.