I enjoyed this. When it first began, I thought that it was not going to fit very well, despite the interesting melody, because the vocal sync did not strike me as perfect. But as the song picked up steam, everything seemed to fall into place, leaving a quirky, interesting song to enjoy.

very nicely constructured — I haven’t heard all your uploads but this is my favorite of what I’ve heard.

I’m not crazy about the synthy-sythn but that’s totally subjective. Meanwhile, it does seem to be missing high freqs…

Sweet mix….

beautiful stuff, penston!

I like your style.