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Joy (The Emotions: Part 2)
by essesq
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Thu, Dec 2, 2010 @ 7:42 PM
 
spinmeister
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permalink   Thu, Dec 2, 2010 @ 8:13 PM
I had been wondering what the essesq version of this might sound like. Now I know! :-)

More seriously - this is my favorite poem of yours yet. Not only because of the uplifting topic, but it struck me as a very carefully crafted journey of word and image association. With not an extraneous syllable to be found.

If it took you quite a while to get it this compact and precise, it shows in the high quality of the result.

If on the other hand, you just whipped this up, I would have to hate you for having that much talent without working up a sweat. ;-)
 
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permalink   essesq Thu, Dec 2, 2010 @ 8:20 PM
Bless you Spinmeister, giver of instant gratification :-).

To be fair, I have been thinking about writing a poem on this topic for a very long time. I worked at it months ago, gave up, and then two words led to about 10-15 minutes of writing this evening.

Alas, as I have no real work ethic in my creative life, stuff has to come quickly or not at all … :-)
 
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permalink   spinmeister Thu, Dec 2, 2010 @ 8:22 PM
sounds like according to my prior commitment, I now have to officially hate you ;-)
Loveshadow
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permalink   Mon, Dec 6, 2010 @ 4:15 PM
So you dusted of the mic and got busy eh.

Dont forget that old question
` Anyone can do this right ? ’

Nice-icle.
 
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permalink   essesq Sun, Nov 15, 2015 @ 1:40 PM
Only 5 years late on the thank you… That darn question will dog me for the rest of my days, in more ways than one…
Snowflake
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permalink   Sun, Nov 15, 2015 @ 11:58 AM
you are a gifted poet.
 
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permalink   essesq Sun, Nov 15, 2015 @ 1:42 PM
Awwww….you are too kind. (blushes…lowers eyes)…(looks up, smiling…) Can I put this on my resume :-)????