DOPE dude, but the ending ummmm.

You’ve created a really nice groove here but not developed the idea enough.

To me the mix feels its straining to go somewhere but can’t escape the repetition.

I think it needs a more dominant lead sound to turn this really good groove into something special

hey its a great attempt… nice work.. may be a rapid hard guitar notes would work nicely??

thanks for using the samples… ;)