I think you did a very well done pop-track. I guess you could improve the mixing, because it sounds a little thin (in case you didn`t want some 80ies touch, the hihat is a little dominant and the industrial sounds of the drumset make the backing mix a little plastic, but forget me, even if you`d intended it to sound that way it`s sweet somehow), but it`s still a very nice track, I really like the arrangement.

This is nice. Some industrial elements, some 80’s synth/pop. I like the tempo change/break at 0:53. I keep thinking of early Madonna as I listen. Get’s fiver from me.

This is an interesting version.
I liked the synth in the chorus and the way you ‘hit the brakes’ before every new verse. Nice idea.

the early ‘80’s vibe, but thinking more Cyndi Lauper/Human League than Madonna myself…

Great work. Love the 6/8 breakdowns, and the swing of the hat (even if it is a bit loud in the mix). You obviously have a great ear, musically…just work on the mixing and you’re on fire.