As I said the first time you posted this, I love the vibe! Now I’m going to try commenting on the changes you made.

The non-bass parts are noticeably louder on this new version, which makes the mix much more balanced overall.

But I still feel the kick is bit overwhelming at some points (for example 2:10). The balance in other places is just about perfect (3:05 for instance), so I think you should just tone down the crescendos a bit.

Just my opinion anyway. I hope other ccmixters will give you more advice. :)