I love the way you intone this with your accent—it works very well. I like very much the ambulance, although it might have been used a little less often to greater effect. I like the backing music very well.

I hope you will also upload (if you have not already) just your poem in a dry a capella version. If you do, I will remix it, either with something very dark or with something very light, but perhaps in either event with something interesting and fun.