i’m kind of torn here. the production is good, no question there. i think my issue mostly is around the verse sections of the vocals. the chorus sections sound good in front of your mix. the verse sections are well done, but the vox sound slightly ahead of the mix. not all the time, but it’s just a distraction. i do like your arrangement though, and i think as it goes along, i move past the early part that was throwing me. i like the violin stuff alot.

I love this. The way you’ve retimed the vocal makes it so evocative and poignant. Keep up the good work.