There’s a nice feel about this and the effects add to the overall mix.

Only criticism is that the faders need to be brought down a little when the vox comes in especially on the effects then raised as the vox finishes. This way you’ll get more dynamics into the piece.

Nice work!

Holy smokes, this is cool. GREAT drums and percussion. It’s got a sort of BT This Binary Universe feel to the instruments.

I agree with radiotimes about the levels, but other than that, this is a great job.

Holy smokes is right- wow, I would have never put the two of these together but it works. I would agree with level stuff, Jeremy loses a little warmth when the vox is pushed up this high, but the tension (kinda like rubber bands snapping) in the backing track is tingly good.

instrumentally dig everything about this track…there’s something about the vocals I can’t quite put my finger on…at times more melodically it seems perfect…at others it seems like the vocals are at a different tempo that clashes with the BPM of the instrumental a bit. Not sure if that was the intent…I’m left with the feeling of wanting to hear the vocals slowed down / time stretched in portions of this track…but that may mess with the overall melodic flow which in itself is incredible.