v creative and sampling of lyrics, thanks for mixing me!

OK, I’m sure you will not take this review the wrong way.
Besides, you have a couple of nice tracks! I actually used two of them in my DanceMixter compilations a few years ago ;)

So to be honest, your track has some issues. Most noticeable is that vocals are out of tune with backing track, and that prevents an enjoyable listening experience.
It also seems to me that the pad/organ line is out of tune with the rest of the track (or it may be the vocals again).
Overall it is a little monotone/overwhelming in the long term.
Regarding EQ, too much bass and lacking middles.

Strong points for me are the beats, bass and rhodes lines, and FX. Nice, smooth sounds there.

Hope this is a constructive review!