I like innabar vocals alot, never could find the right setting for them though. I like the choir voices you added. I’m not a fan of the beat though, I think I understand what you were going for, just found it too repetative, maybe adding some nice fast hand drums over the top to give it some variation?
I guess I feel that although I enjoyed it I wanted it too do just a bit more, Just my thoughts though. In the end you do what you want to do. Enjoyed though, thanks :)