The intro is nice, and the way you’ve used fx on the vocals and pan them is fun in my headphones.
I like the beats loop on this one, and the little melodic bursts—you get a soulful feel in the mix. There are a lot of cool little themes here, and you wisely don’t dwell on any too long. You get a really nice chill sound out of it.
I like this better than the vocal fx/pan, as it’s just a good sound.

This is an enjoyable song. It ends well, but early. Good job.

I’d love to hear this one re-done with just the chill parts from the second half and fewer vocal games.
I love vocal games, but the downtempo fun at the end really makes this song.