I like the way the samples are clear when interspersed. The electro-beat is interesting. But some of the electronica is a bit familiar to my jaded ears, and a few of the electronica tinges are not appealing. I like the way you can hear the ideas in the words in your song—no burial of the point problem here. But I feel that you could take your strongest parts and add some new material, and have something better.

Word!…had me grooving…like how u tricked the samples…and sweet changes…i just wanted it to PUNCH more!!!…oh well i’ll just turn it up -LOL!