A cool little synth line and beat gets us going.

I like the little line of melody under the vocals, which counterpoints nicely with the basic vocal. Similarly, the little tad of strings works pretty well.

I’m not the world’s greatest ear about such things, but once in a while the matching of the vox to the beat sounds imperfect—not badly, just as if a few places the vox should be manually adjusted because the bpm is not fully consistent in the vox.

The elements of the song mix in well, although given how alive your musical elements are, I wish for some fx on the vocals to give them a bit more sparkle.

I think that an instrumental break in the middle might help enliven this one, as the repeated nature of the melody is a drawback.

I like the way that the little pieces of this song work well together to give it a coherent feel.