This is something that will definitely get remixed. It’s great that you uploaded the whispered section, but I suggest that you add the whispers to this upload, and then note in the little “says” section that you have done this. I say this because I came upon the whispers first, and did not “see” how it all fit until I heard this.
Also, you don’t need to put “yours truly” on the featuring, because we assume you feature yourself unless you tell us you’re featuring someone else.

This one is a solid, well-spoken piece with lots of allusive imagery and ideas that should make it work well for a remixer.

I absolutely love this… and I sampled it. I’m recommending everywhere that I post my mix that folks come check out the full recitation. It really is beautiful… thanks for sharing.

I’m glad you uploaded the whispered vocal dubs to this…when vocals are uploaded with the dubs, it can really help to flesh out a mix.

Strangely sexy - So offhand and bored with life; yet writhing with images. Very nice poetry and delivery.

Beautiful lyrics, introspective and thought-provoking…

inspiring, opening and beautiful. yes.