Dynamic intro, raucous, and workable. I like the spoken word track on this one. I always have the dilemma on one of these whether to add more fx or to leave it in a more unaltered state.
I like this take better than the earlier one you posted. It’s tricky, I think to choose just how to balance between the vox and the key riff. I think you handled it well. A solid, interesting mix.

yea, I’m afraid I have serious problems with this mix. I mean, there’s no doubt there are talented people on this track but it really sounds like they were way too busy thinking about what they doing and not feeling the performance.