This track is really great, techno and trippy! :P
Like it very much.

Not sure if it fits Silvia’s voice as is though, specially in the darker segments; maybe adding some filters/effects would help.
Also, there are some voice sync problems; I know it’s difficult for non-spanish speakers to sync this lyric (see this thread for example).

P.S: You may like to check my remix; not as good as yours indeed! ;)

I really can`t judge the sync issue here, but at least your mix is very well down, the arrangement is interesting and from ebm fans to pop fans there are people who might like this, at least there`s enough emotional impact in this track. (maybe you could place the vocals more laidback?)

Hoi,

Checkin yer track, nice and dark. Great structure runs thro this track, production is cool but I see what u mean when u said that you were hoping for additional inspiration. It did seem a touch predictable in places with the note / musical interaction.

Still a great effort though.

Thx for the note by the way

Morr