A challenging listen, as the bpms of the vocals and backing track do not line up.
The density of lower to mid range sounds tend to overwhelm the vocals as well, requiring a focused listen to hear what the vocalist is saying.
Individually, the added stems would definitely be great song starters, as I can imagine a number of mixters building upon your samples.
When you get a chance, I’d recommend adding a preview mp3 to increase the accessibility of your upload :)