Thanks onlymeith !
I tried to let “space” around the voice, but it was hard to mix it with the whole instruments…

I find the voice level ok. a matter of taste I guess…

Thanks LS. Yet I tried to give unity in the progress, guided by Kristin’song.

Thank you ducky !
Made all the riffs and textures by myself, attempting the omelette to be digestible.

Well, you certainly know your way around digital audio manipulation… “Sure, just make a long-term fumbler toward sonic variety and cleanliness like myself feel foolish…” ;-)

Sure, sir !
Yet harmonic studies help a lot to find a way through sonic development.
Personnally, when I start to work on an a-capella, I first write the melodic line on a sheet, just to examine the chord context, and choose the ones which fit with the feeling I want to render.
Anyway, each as his own recipes !!!

Thanks durden !
I don’t know what you exactly mean with “cadence” (in French it’s a harmonic conclusive form, as IV V I). Maybe you talk about the beat?