Hi and thanks for using this! I really love your title—very clever! And you got a good lyric/vocal track here. The words are profound and have an important message. Thing is, I’d like to hear more of you and less of the original “Unsichtbar” track (especially the sound fx etc.). I think your voice, and the words, and the mood of the words, fit the beat/groove really well—but like, I think you need more space. Maybe use a simplified, stripped down backing track, and push your vocal track up? Well, that’s just my take, but you got a strong lyric there.

und wir brechen durch das Glas

It is easy to feel invisible, especially over fifty.

Like the b/t

would you share your typed lyrics? they are really speaking to me today.