I can see where you were going with this and the overall feel of the piece is very nice. The placement of the vocals in the mix was really good.

There were times in the mix when you introduced a trumpet sounding synth which made me think that if you could have added some sampled trumpet instead it would have added another dimension to the work but still keeping the overall chill effect. Anyway that’s just me wearing a producers hat and giving a personal view.

I Love the instruments, the music, rhythm, and melody. While the vocals sit on top okay, I think I would have enjoyed this more as an instrumental piece, or with different vocals. Again, I love the music of this, but I don’t think the vocals did the instrumentals justice. Can I hear an instrumental only version of this?

I used this track for the titles and credits in a Facebook video titled “7 questions to transform negatives experiences in positives ones”. The audio is a practical psychology class.

Thank you IceSun for sharing your talent and helping othes (like me).