Well, the idea is quite nice.
There are some things in the armony I wish to be changed: the sub is long 4 bars, in the 4th bar the note and the accord is the same that the 1st, when it should give a sense of “waiting for the big drop”. Then, I don’t feel the sub that usually alternates with the kick. The kick itself has too less sub.
I liked the timbrical variation of the synth (the cutoff changes). I liked too the kick variation that give a “rave” feel. The strings seems to be too less “fat”.. give a touch of chorus.
If you want to get deeper with trance you could use trancegates as well, as some fattest synths for the main melody.