Reviews for "I do not wish to linger"
I do not wish to lingerby Fireproof_Babies
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Tue, Jan 18, 2011 @ 6:35 AM
media, remix, ccplus, drums, electronic, experimental, female_vocals, form, free, guitar, psychedelic, rock
panu
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Tue, Jan 18, 2011 @ 10:25 AM
nice, nice brotherman. very original 24th century asian beat coffee house vibe. cue the finger snaps.
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Hehehe…. thanks Panu :D Some of this might be hard to finger-snap along with. Odd accents and time-signatures flying wild. Thanks for listening.
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colab
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Tue, Jan 18, 2011 @ 11:18 AM
This is an excellent departure of styles for you in some ways - the random-ish beat, chords and blips in the back really add something special to this track. Really like it. Great idea and musical execution.
I think there’s room to tweak the mixing though. Right now it lacks “body”. Or, put differently, some “oomph”. Maybe the vocals need to be reigned in because it sounds like they might affect the overall loudness of the track? Love the musical idea and execution though. To my taste this is a real sweet-spot. |
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Thank you for the compliments and the constructive criticism. I hear exactly what your saying. the mix is a bit off. I’ll attempt to remedy that tonight. Thanks for the review, my friend.
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New and inproved, thanks Collab :)
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Tue, Jan 18, 2011 @ 1:15 PM
I like the ‘discordance’ and especially like the bit where that sweetly aching guitar comes in (a bit more that halfway through)..and love the ending.
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Thank you so much, debbizo. I love your poem. Very glad you approve :)
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Wed, Jan 19, 2011 @ 2:30 AM
Stretching Fireproof Babies. Came back to listen a second time. Something changed for the better.
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A second listen….. Thank you, texasradiofish. Love yer stuff :)
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Kara Square
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Wed, Jan 19, 2011 @ 11:44 AM
I love this poem by Deb… and your musical accents are very complementary. The pause after “turn off the switch” is perfect. I’m very impressed with your interpretation.
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Thanks MMT! That was my fav part of the composition as well…. didn’t have to play anything, and it fit the lyric. Thanks for reviewing :)
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