Im glad too see the track inspired you to put down something to it, but I must say the vocals are to forward, I say they need to be merged better with the sounds or some effects, but its true “beauty is in the eye of the beholder� I like the end how you said “forget about it� the way you said that had some real emotion or just less of an effort to make it form right, but at any rate you got my gratitude.
Thanks
Matthew