I like the way the beats came out, and in particular that you did not overdo the levels on these beats, but kept them subordinate to the poem. I like that old Casio synth!I remember when those first came out. The poem is indeed excellent, and you’ve done a nice accompaniment to it.

I would have been tempted to fade your electronica in and out to give some silence and breathing space to some of the words. Still, I really like this mix, and the fun sense of little beats bursting all around my headphones.