The percussion sounds good, but it does not, for me, work so well with the vocals.

I like the spareness of the piece, but it needs a bit more than just vox and percussion, to my ears. The little synth wave at 2:00 is welcome less for itself than because it is something different.

The loops of percussion are all good enough, and the idea of a simple percussion and vocals track is not a bad one, but this one needs more oomph to quite sell.