I like the simple percussion feel of the initial parts. I like those little keyboard things you’ve added. Although it is a bit experimental, you roll through the first minute with a modernist/jazz feel that works very well.

I like the minimal feel of the instrumentation, and the guitar line. I’d like to hear that curious guitar line pulled up a bit.

The feel of this song complements the vocals well.

I like that you’re not afraid to depart from traditional diatonic song structure in aspects of your song, and yet it all works more as song than as mere experiment. I’m tempted to say something like “this is not so very experimental and risky” and yet I’ve never seen much point in people saying competitive things about what is and is not an experiment.

I’d rather say that I enjoyed this one, and it’s my favorite of your mixes thus far.