solid track with a good rap, decent mix of an oldschoolish beat with the newer elements of rap. I suggest limit the chorus-loop to 1 iteration (MAYBE 2) per chorus. it adds at first but gets tedious. after second chorus add a new element. just suggestions. good stuff.

I LOVE THE WAY YOU’VE DEALT WITH THE CHORUS AND I LIKE THE RAP….THE BEAT IS REAL OLD SKOOL, GOT A MAD TOO SHORT FEEL. OAKLAND STYLEE….WHICH IS COOL BUT…AS CRITICISM, I WANT TO HEAR THE LOW END DO MORE AS THERE IS SO MUCH SPACE IN THE BEATS, JUST TO WARM IT UP A BIT…NOT SURE WHAT YOU THINK OF MY STUFF, BUT IF IT’S COOL WITH YOU, SEND ME A VERSE OR TWO AND I’LL DROP A BEAT WITH YOU AND CURIOUS ON IT…???? YOU KNOW, I JUST BEEFED THE LOW END ON MY EQ AND IT SOUNDS LIKE YOU HAVE ACTUALLY EQ’D ANY MID OUT OF IT. I THINK THIS MAY BE ALL THAT IS MAKING THE SUB A BIT DULL….PUT A BIT OF THAT SPARKLE BACK AND THEN SEE HOW IT WORKS…I KNOW YOU DIDN’T ASK FOR MY OPINION, JUST TELL ME TO SHUT THE F*CK UP. I DON’T KNOW SHIT.
pEACE………….aSHwAN.