EDIT: Have added an extra verse and redone the vocals. And dropped the vst-drums. Stems added.
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Demo of a song idea I came up with today. The busy drums are just a vst-instrument preset added without much thought as a tempo guide for the vox. The melody was busked up on the fly and could probably be improved and tightened up with a bit of practice. The lyrics were likewise produced quickly and maybe could be extended. Anyway, will add dry stems. Lyrics:

LIMBO

CHORUS

so let me out or let me in
so let’s finish it or maybe begin
and what’s this place you put me in?
a state of grace or a limbo for my sins?

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lost in the labyrinth of my mind
running down alleyways, all of them blind
chasing shadows, clutching at straws
banging my head on barred and bolted doors

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down in the doldrums with no wind for my sails
pax vobiscum lying on a bed of nails
so don’t keep me guessing where I put my foot wrong
don’t keep me stessing coz I been here far too long

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stuck in no man’s land no signal for my phone
don’t understand why I am in this twilight zone
one step forward and then two steps back
my heels are kicking, yours are clicking down the track

Recommended by: ScOmBer, sLow_starteR, short hopper, unreal_dm, rocavaco, Linden Tree (Michael_Lindentree), Stefan Kartenberg (JeffSpeed68)

"Limbo"
by Javolenus

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