There’s some really nice moments in here, but the EQ/mastering needs a second look, and the vox could stand to be chopped to fit better. Love the idea, though!

Great idea and the start of the piece is very good.

You need to watch how you use the loops as the overall feel of this is repetative which is a shame as the mix has a lot going for it.

Don’t misunderstand me there’s nothing wrong with loops you just need to be more selective to get a more natural feel to the piece.

Well done for a great idea.

i love the piano riff at the start of the song, its really commercial and works well. needs a break or key change, a small key change, but change nonetheless. potential here is massive.