This is pretty great - I love how you’ve turned my grunge thing into a funky rock song with reggae overtones.

I have two suggestions for it though:

1. Lose the fadeout at the end. A decisive ending always sounds better.

2. In the chorus sections, I’d highly recommend having the overall chord going up by a half step (instead of down a whole step, or staying at the same note) on the final “heard” for each one. It would give it that extra little edge.

Any chance you’d upload your tracks so that this can be remixed further?

I LOVE this!!!

Everything you do is exceptional, Zep.

This really rocks. Great!