I liked the start immediately. The arrangement is refreshing and has enough changes and surprises to keep me glued. Track ends with a nice finish.

There are two aspects that you might want to relook: (1) The vocal alignment (for the chorus part) may need further tweaking. It got a bit distracting when the vocals don’t sound quite as aligned as it can be. Then it got better at the second “how do I make you see” stanza, until the chorus came in again. (2) The overall track volume sounds a bit on the loud-n-slighty-discomforting side on my earphones (could be they are cheap ones!)

for me the soul in MVW’s soft delivery goes way beyond pop. but, hey, you must know that ‘cause you did this great track to back her up.

I like this very much, and your tags are bang on. The track really clicks with me and manages to trigger my early 90s nostalgia buttons.

I like.

Terrific treatment! I really enjoyed, particularly appreciating the shift from the lush guitar wash to the intense guitar pulse. Bravo!

I like it!

thanks, urmymuse! delighted to hear this mix! very refreshing indeed.

re: the vocal alignment problem, my bad. shouldn’t have assumed that everyone could hear the beats in my head. I’ll try to include a separate pell with metronome beats in the background next time. :-)