I think this certainly deserves a bettr title than “meh”! Super-clean production and a good pacing and dynamics kept my ears glued. Don’t be so hard on yourself!

Don’t worry, I know how you feel. Sometimes you have been working so long on a track that it starts to get boring / annoying / frustrating. But one thing I have learned during my stay here, is that you should never trust your own judgement. So I agree with that yellow winged animal (who has more reviews than the amount of days an average yellow winged animal will live, but then again, this is no ordinary, and surely no average, yellow winged animal).

For me it’s near to perfect within its genre .
I can only complain about the vocal usage; it was more like sampling an instrument, so I don’t understand when you say “the vox fits really well” :S
But the track rocks!