there is some really nice work here - i like the loop and a lot of the edits. just a note, when the cello part enters, it seems it may be in a different key than the rest of the track?

I like a lot the arrangement you make here, you reach the appropriate ambiance for Snowflake’s voice, it’s a pleasure to hear it, but I agree with her, I feel that some notes of the cello are in the border (or perhaps my ear is not ready).
BTW, wellcome.

i think this is fab, its atmospheric,ambient but seething at the same time …. i can feel it burning !