Your sax underlines the dubsta approach. not bad for a first time out. Overall, it’s successful, but recommend bringing calendargirl’ vocals forward, so that when you compress it for contrast, there is more noticeable contrast. Let the mix ring a little at the end. Otherwise, nicely done.

I love what you did here! Very Portishead-esque — the reverb, the seductive sax, the tease of the keyboard — all create a sense of mystery.