I will start by saying I liked it, but it really did feel like six and a half minutes.
Some of the early stabs seemed a little too off for my ears but the overall feel, when it settled into itself, was enjoyable. The vocals had a nice treatment and sat perfectly in the mix.
I probably would have cut the length by at least a couple of minutes and played around with the nice groove section toward the end.

Still a deserved 5 for the atmos.

it’s great..
Make more!