The effects on the vocals need to be a bit more sparing here - the distortion and wah are a bit much. I have a bit of a hard time following the song - things don’t really seem to connect. There’s some interesting parts where the loop begins to play, but then it cuts back out…maybe a slightly less effected version could be part of another song, but honestly, this has got of a hard time standing on its own. Keep working at it, though!

Blimey, that vocal is certainly obtrusive, might want to tone that down a little. Keep at it though, in the end, producing a great track comes through trial and error (unless you’re one of those lucky rich folk who end up attending Berklee school of music or something).