I am seriously impressed. I know you don’t typically take on “songs” and this one really works. It has a cohesive feel that is interesting to the ear and an edginess that tickles :-). I know you’ve done quite a bit I haven’t listened to. I’ll get around to them soon, but this one deserved special mention. I don’t think you need to hide from this kind of stuff :-).

Love the avatar.

You should definitely do more songs, because this one sounds very good. At first I had the impression that the vocals could be a wee bit louder, but later on in the song they sound better in the mix. Anyway, .

Dig the FX and the imperfect like message in the sound like, it seems as humans evolve into this perfect like state they might distroy what their is to obtain that state, but is it competetion driving that state?…all i know is im soon homeless but Free. Im leaving the Sound business because its becoming to perfect even to break even and aweful time consuming, had some aweful reviews at other sites, i had always used the title “Artist” and had disclaimers up. After i read the average songwriter earns < 5 grand a year (BMI) i said is it really worth it im not even near average…lol..I got a bang out of this contest their was a sudden extention and sign up…the good old’ club…Keep the Ambient Chill!
Bravo on the Mixes!…and i sure still miss my Dogs!…

just discovered this again today. your treatment and placement is so creative — creates mystery and mood.