A great first contribution. There’s a lot of variety in your arrangements to keep it interesting, and its a very clearly produced recording, with everything, most importantly the vocals, able to be easily heard.

If I had any suggestion at all, it would be a more prominent bass line. The kick’s down in the cellar, but that’s about the only sound I’m hearing down there (until about 3/4 of the way through, anyway.)

Hey man I love your style ,
peace