Because you asked for “in progress” feedback, here goes.

I actually like the distorted pad and piano combination with the vocals - which creates an odd but very good mix of insanity and peace.

The drums really are overwhelming right now though - not the glitch, but the volume/intensity and that they don’t vary throughout.

So yeah. I think you’re onto something here.

Love the concept! Love how you used the pell. Great beats. And I would listen to Colab as for the rest — he knows what he is talking about!

I’m honored you chose this. Thanks.

There’s something intriguing about it. Pulsing, yet doesn’t take away from the sweetness of my little pooky :’ ) I look forward to where you’re taking this.

(I do think the voices are drowned out.)