Beautiful words. You made me tear up. I’m so sorry for your loss…

very good !!

This is extraordinary Deb. An incredible piece of emotion and imagery. Intimate and big as the universe all at the same time. I played it off Facebook and when I hit play all I got was a white screen with the very minimalist play bar of Quicktime. Your words just hung in the air with that blankness behind them…it was an amazing moment. Many poems are evocative but this is transcendent. Incredible work. I am so sorry for your loss.