OK!!! thanx!!!

You know, I don’t know I can do much with this, because it’s not the sort of thing I do well. I may try. But this is actually a rather interesting sample. If you’d like to try something little more freestyle and free form, and leave the pellas unadorned, I’d try to do somethiing with it. My suggestion is that you keep it real to where you are and live, and not worry too much about “sounding like a rapper”. You’ve got your own voice, and that might be fun to share.