Not bad at all! The “do to you” is nicely synced and makes for a really cool, catchy effect - but yeah, the other parts aren’t very well in sync. My other criticisms would be that it doesn’t really climax anywhere; you can achieve that effect by adding some high-frequency percussion, things like hihats, rides, or crashes, and more defined snare drums. Bring those in and out where it feels right to do so and you can change up the dynamic of the song a lot; most trance music does this with a hit-you-over-the-head type of subtlety that is nevertheless a good lesson on such variations :) . I really like your synth sounds and melodies/harmonies here! Keep it up!

Nice, bouncy mix with a subtle use of a short pell. Nicely done.