Thanks for checking Anandamine. I used Melodyne my first time, but wrong as you heard. Will definitely try to get that song working.

you’re on the right way to make something great.
Have fun with melodyne…its the most terrific software I have ever used.
I do not use it for my remix but its really helpful.

oh, here’s hoping you’ll continue to expand the development of the track with more goodies in the bridge and last chorus (if you have time!) :)

Oh for sure, Snowflake! It allready sucked me in so hard … i want to carefully countinue your great Vocals on my lines. Still not sure how i progress but maybe i try to switch to the original harmonies in the last chorus?
So glad you liked what you allready heard. I was not sure how i twisted you harmonies, how you would like it, or even accept it :)
I have to translate the text to get the exact details for progression. It is a good sign, that i almost cried while listening to this while the rain droped on big mother earth :)
Musical hugs outta switzerland

wow — now you’re making me cry. wishing it was raining here in dry San Diego upon our dear Mother Earth.

i really like where you are going with the minor melody. maybe add some more depth in other instrumentation or more by adding some flavor of rhythm? of course and most important, follow the flow and your muse!

peace. :)

Thank you! Please mind my new upload from today. Hope the arrangement fits better now