Like this remix.
Very moving.

Would have liked to hear the synth line a little less prominent when Silvia is singing. Perhaps some prevalent reverb on it as well.

Very nice atmosphere, steady flow. The compression was a bit harsh to my ear, but understanding the lyrics, the sound does not have to be that smooth, a bit aggressive electronics is ok! What I consider a slight problem, is the somewhat loose connection between the vocals and the gear. I’m not saying I know what should be done, I’m just saying something could maybe be done. Just something, maybe related to mix / mastering. Excellent work, anyway!