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Reviews for "Black Lullaby (Papillon berceuse)"

Black Lullaby (Papillon berce...
by keytronic
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Sat, Jan 17, 2015 @ 1:27 PM

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diaphane
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permalink   Sat, Jan 17, 2015 @ 1:52 PM
This is absolutely beau-ti-ful !!!!
Perfect balance between delicacy,poetry, elegance, gorgeous synthipop, and deep guitars.
I’m very touched (moved to tears) by your musical sensitivity. It’s the first time I feel this, here, it reminds me this deep and rare electro-pop-understanding I had with Ditto-Ditto.THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH for including me, it’s a big gift (and I had a bad cold) !!!!!!
You’re right I made a mistake subconsciously… between lullaby and butterfly !!!!My bad english is finally quite poetic and surrealist …. :)
 
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permalink   keytronic Sat, Jan 17, 2015 @ 1:58 PM
Oh…OHHH….now you got me….
What a great thing to have make this emotional for you.
And honestly - your song is wonderful - I have tried to handle it with care - still it got a bit rich towards the end…..

Get well soon….and: What mistake ? That’s art !!!
reiswerk
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permalink   Sat, Jan 17, 2015 @ 2:36 PM
Sweet and romantic!
Bluemillenium
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permalink   Sun, Jan 18, 2015 @ 3:27 AM
The voice of the singer is not sufficiently emphasized, in my opinion, but what a great job!
 
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permalink   keytronic Sun, Jan 18, 2015 @ 5:19 AM
Hey Bluemillenum. Thanks a lot for your hint with the vocals. I believe it is always good to have a second meaning and reconcider the own perception.
I just have exchanged the mp3 and replaced it with an new one giving the vocals more presence.
very much appreciated.
copperhead
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permalink   Sun, Jan 18, 2015 @ 4:27 AM
This is an awesome piece and I like the instrument selection but I tend to agree with Blue. The vocal has to be more encompassing. I like to hear it more breathy.
 
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permalink   keytronic Sun, Jan 18, 2015 @ 5:22 AM
After listening with my monitors I must absolutely state that you both are right.
I have mainly worked with the compression and decently put more volume to the vocal tracks. This gives Diaphane’s vocals more room and supports her innocense and sexyniess. ;-)

Thanks a lot for hinting !! Those “different” meanings help me get better stuff out :-)

Just exchanged the mp3 with the new version.
catayela
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permalink   Sun, Jan 18, 2015 @ 8:46 AM
I really like the original song, and you have added your own touch with a great talent, very nice remix , congratulation to both Diaphane and You
unreal_dm
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permalink   Sun, Jan 18, 2015 @ 10:53 AM
Very nicely done - soft warm and enjoyable.
Stefan Kartenberg
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permalink   Mon, Jan 19, 2015 @ 5:54 AM
super pop song - like it much