Hi Zep and thanks for this. Yeah I agree it needs a chorus or some stronger hook. I was aiming for a feel similar to John Martyn’s “Bless The Weather” and simply sang pretty much the first words that came to mind (writing the song while actually recording). I like the guitar groove and think there’s potential. I can try to add more—let me know if I can help further. As it stands the lyric is about being in a relationship where you have no control, and where, though you can see your partner heading for trouble, you are powerless because of communication problems.

I also love that groovy guitar and the chords you’ve selected. Good stuff. If you add something within the next, say, 24 hours I can carry it/them into the remix. I love this piece.

Hi Zep—OK, I’ve just added three new files to the Downloads Section: gtr_arpeggios, gtr_harmonics, vox_impro. These are spontaneous improvisations and they’re probably a bit sloppy, but I wanted to give you a bit more raw material. Hope this helps?! Cheers and thanks again.

Great! I’ll check them out. Thanks!

OK but they’ll needs editing—I’m just hoping that you can get enough good fragments to flesh out the song/mix!

I’ll give them the best treatment and the best drugs I can offer.

Cheers Zep—I cannot ask for more! All the best, and look forward to hearing what you come up with.

Those additional tracks are da bomb. They will spice it up

Hey, great to hear that! especially as I had no idea what I was going to sing/play when I hit the “Record” button!